I really like the idea of the map with the letter balloons. I think that style gives viewers something that they automatically recognize and can relate with. It fits very well with the idea of finding a location.
I think the logo has great potential. Still needs something else. Maybe even more simple. I have a hard time with simplifying a logo, but maybe a slightly more simple.... something.
I think that I am most drawn to the first poster where the name is featured more prominently. I think that in some of the other posters it gets lost a little bit. I like the logo, but I agree with Josh that you might want to explore simplifying it. I also like the connection of the sort of google map with GPS, but I feel like it might be somewhat confusing to people as to what your non profit actually stands for.
My favorites are 3, 4, 5, and the last one. There's something about the "yahoo map" that draws you in and is visually appealing. I love the colors in 4, the painter like quality is very strong. Your weakest are definitely the blue ones with the ribbons.
Got to say, I'm most drawn to 3. The bubbles breaking through the line containing the map creates a nice energy to the poster. The reason it works better than 5, I think, is because 5 is too centered and static.
7's not bad either, but it lacks something to give it some extra punch. Or it could be because of the size of the logo, taking so much space.
I like number four. I like this direction with the color swatches. Maybe mix these colors with some of the silhouettes of the people. I also like the map direction. Maybe play with other types of maps. Maybe cut out people in the map or something. I like the largest type being about finding a resource center.
I agree that using the familiar imagery of the map and bubbles (along with with ribbon logo) automatically tells the viewer what your organization is about. Either 3 or 5 works best. The first one could work best if the ribbon turned into the road with a bubble.
Daniel I like the way that you are going with the 3rd one. I love the map and the I am here bubbles. Very relevant to today and people looking in map quest. I do think you need to work on your relation between your type and image though. Also I think your logo is a bit big.
i like the idea you have with using the google map location blurbs, so that makes 3 and 5 my favorites.I would play with them a little more though.I feel like they both could use some work.
I really like the idea of the map with the letter balloons. I think that style gives viewers something that they automatically recognize and can relate with. It fits very well with the idea of finding a location.
ReplyDeleteI think the logo has great potential. Still needs something else. Maybe even more simple. I have a hard time with simplifying a logo, but maybe a slightly more simple.... something.
ReplyDeleteI think that I am most drawn to the first poster where the name is featured more prominently. I think that in some of the other posters it gets lost a little bit. I like the logo, but I agree with Josh that you might want to explore simplifying it. I also like the connection of the sort of google map with GPS, but I feel like it might be somewhat confusing to people as to what your non profit actually stands for.
ReplyDeleteI like the second poster the most. It is simple yet the ball in the corner brings the viewer in to then read the text above.
ReplyDeleteMy favorites are 3, 4, 5, and the last one. There's something about the "yahoo map" that draws you in and is visually appealing. I love the colors in 4, the painter like quality is very strong. Your weakest are definitely the blue ones with the ribbons.
ReplyDeleteGot to say, I'm most drawn to 3. The bubbles breaking through the line containing the map creates a nice energy to the poster. The reason it works better than 5, I think, is because 5 is too centered and static.
ReplyDelete7's not bad either, but it lacks something to give it some extra punch. Or it could be because of the size of the logo, taking so much space.
I like number four. I like this direction with the color swatches. Maybe mix these colors with some of the silhouettes of the people. I also like the map direction. Maybe play with other types of maps. Maybe cut out people in the map or something. I like the largest type being about finding a resource center.
ReplyDeleteI agree that using the familiar imagery of the map and bubbles (along with with ribbon logo) automatically tells the viewer what your organization is about. Either 3 or 5 works best. The first one could work best if the ribbon turned into the road with a bubble.
ReplyDeleteDaniel I like the way that you are going with the 3rd one. I love the map and the I am here bubbles. Very relevant to today and people looking in map quest. I do think you need to work on your relation between your type and image though. Also I think your logo is a bit big.
ReplyDeletei like the idea you have with using the google map location blurbs, so that makes 3 and 5 my favorites.I would play with them a little more though.I feel like they both could use some work.
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